"Strangled Secretary" - A Custom Video Script

[Nyghtfall]

On April 7, one of my favorite fetish models, Kendra James, will be visiting Evangeline von Winter for a shooting session. I'll be paying at least $100 for a 10-15-minute custom video featuring her and and Eve's husband. I had another model in mind for the video, which was to be shot later this month, but I've recast the role after deciding Kendra would be better suited for it. I thought you all might like an advance look at the script.

My idea for Kendra's look will include:

Knee-length pencil skirt with matching button-down blouse and jacket
Black 5" stiletto open-toe slingbacks or pumps (NO PLATFORMS)
White or Nude sheer stockings or pantyhose
White lace bra and matching panties
Full makeup with red lipstick, red finger and toe nail polish
Her hair in a French bun.

The link below points to a PDF to retain the script's formatting. If you don't have a PDF reader, you can download one from Adobe, here.

http://www.cinemasphyxia.com/stuff/EVW_Custom.pdf

[Egeek]

We both share common fetishes so I can relate to that type of theme story on more then one element. A boner for sure. I never wrote in script form before. Probably should learn. especially if I ever do learn how to create a fun little movie out of lego or for a custom if I do save up for one. Its a nice basic theme. lovely secretary becomes lovely dead doll secretary. I like how you broke it down with the camera angles. Nice details of the fetish elements. I like how the kill was the pleasure enjoyment. As though the kill was the rape sort to speak. If the killer did rape her after the kill that would have worked for me too. Both ways work well for me in general. I see it as what ever is going on in the psyche of the killer. Hope it turns out well and hope to see screencaps if you want to share them. it would help illustrate this nice little story scene.

[Nyghtfall]

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

I never wrote in script form before. Probably should learn.

Not much to learn, really. I used Final Draft. It formats everything for you. Version 9 was released a few days ago, and is currently on sale for $200.

[Egeek]

speaking of this custom idea. what ever happen with the custom? did it come out good or?

[Nyghtfall]

Shooting doesn't start until April.

I've also decided to have her bare-legged.

[Nyghtfall]

Control freaks like me have no business commissioning custom videos. When you have a very clear vision of what you want to see, the anxiety you feel about how well your script will be translated to video, and the anticipation for the finished product, are unbearable. And yet, when an idea involves one of your favorite fetish models, you can't help wanting to see your fantasy brought to life through them.

I've seen Kendra in many bondage and peril scenes over the years. I've only seen her in three fantasy death fetish productions, all by Ruemorgue, the last one being the best and my favorite, "Wet Death", in 2009. This is my first custom featuring her, and my first time working with Eve. It's also my second paid custom. My first one was "In Thirty," by PKF, in 2012. I couldn't feel more excited or anxious right now.

I paid $150 for my custom the other day, and submitted the final draft of my script last night. Kendra will be wearing a pair of these double ankle-strap heels, in black - they're en route to the studio as I write this. I've asked Eve to have Kendra bring a pair of peep-toe pumps if the sandals I ordered don't fit well. I've also decided to have her bare-legged instead of wearing pantyhose or stockings. I want to see her feet reaching for the floor in all their bare-skinned glory.

At this point, the final phase involving me is done. I've written as clear and detailed a script as I could. All I can do now is wait and hope for the best. Unfortunately, I won't know how it turns out until at least 6-8 weeks from now.

[Egeek]

You picked out a hot pair of heels! Ya Im kind of a control freak when it comes to certain things. a custom idea being one. Hope everything turns out good.

[Nyghtfall]

My custom video is done. I received a number of preview pics a few days ago. Levi captured them directly from his editing bay:

http://www.cinemasphyxia.com/stuff/kendra_custom

My script had Kendra remove her shoes while undressing before she's attacked. I didn't want her toes impeded by the shoes while reaching for the floor. Levi left them on. I was really looking forward to seeing Kendra's shoeless feet struggling, but I have to admit what he shot looks much better.

My script also had the killer hoist her body over his shoulder once she's dead, and then carry her over to the couch. I was trying to keep Levi's real-life back problem in mind when I wrote the script, and knew shoulder-carrying her would be easier on him. Instead, he kept her suspended while carrying her, treating me to a couple extra foot shots along the way. With Kendra's shoes left on, the effect looks fantastic!

I'm incredibly thankful the changes he made look so good. Overall, I like what I've seen so far. Kendra brought her own pencil skirt and blouse. With her hair in the French bun I requested, her character looks spot on with what I had in mind. That being said, I'm even more nervous about how the video turned out.

On a humorous note, my script turned into a 12-minute video. I paid for 20-25 minutes. To make up for the remaining 8 minutes, they've offered to shoot the same death scene with another model of my choice, at no extra cost. I've selected Diana Knight. She'll play Kendra's roommate who returns home, finds her body, and meets the same fate. I'm currently shopping for her outfit.

Diana won't be shooting with them until mid-May, which means I won't get my video until the end of May. But, patience is a virtue, especially when it involves another favorite of mine, so I'm happy to wait. ;)

[Egeek]

I have to say that diana looks so hot. The preview screencaps from your custom look petty good too. She gave a lovely death stare and nice tit shot too. Im afraid to even get a custom shot done again. Afraid of how its going to come out.

[GMC8121]

Other than her shoes staying on, that still looks great! Can't wait to see it.

[Egeek]

Ya I know. me too. It looks hot for sure. maybe the heels kept on made it just as sexy or maybe even more.

[Nightposter]

I have written a couple of scripts for Eve and Levi...I have never been disappointed.

[Nyghtfall]

Quick update...

I have long fantastised about a classy, demure woman dying while wearing a Spring or Summer dress. Since it's Spring now, I want to take advantage of the season by having Diana wear something appropriate. If it fits, she'll will be wearing this dress. Unfortunately, I was unable to find an stylish, inexpensive pair of shoes to match that I liked well enough and have them delivered on time, so I'm deferring to Eve and Levi to have Diana bring a pair that match the criteria below as closely as possible:

Cream, Ivory, or White
4" - 5" stilletto heel
Open Toe
Single Sole (I hate platforms)

To compliment the outfit and a add dash of Spring fun to the look, I've asked that she wear her hair down.

I've also asked to make sure that, if she brings strappy heels, to leave them on during the struggle. If she brings pumps, I want them both to fall off. Finally, I'm having the dress stay on throughout the attack. Once she's dead and Levi lays her down, he will simply render her topless while leaving the dress on for some breast and foot fondling.

They start shooting this Saturday.

[markmarr]

Nightfall your script is great and 2 strangles for the price of one, lucky man. I have had several customs from Eve/Levi and they really try to do everything you ask. They are good people.

[Nyghtfall]

I received an email from them yesterday morning. They wrote that Diana's shoot went very well. They've loaded the content onto their computer and will begin editing it next Tuesday when they return from an out-of-state shoot.

Since they also happen to be shooting with Eve and Samantha Grace this weekend, they've offered me a few minutes with each to further bolster the running time at no extra charge, effectively giving me a custom video with a grand total of four models for the price of one.

I'm having Samantha's character attacked while she's preparing for a shower.

She returns home wearing a skirt suit, full makeup including red lipstick, finger and toenail polish, stiletto heels, and her hair down. She heads straight for her bedroom where she casually strips nude and barefoot. She then wraps herself in a towel and makes her way to the bathroom, unaware that the killer slipped into her apartment earlier, and is waiting for her. Moments later, upon exiting the bathroom, she's taken completely by surprise as the killer grabs her throat and forces her against a nearby wall. As with Diana and Kendra, he holds her in place with an iron grip as she struggles against him. He then removes her towel, tosses it aside, and starts groping one of her breasts. Horrified and humiliated, she fights harder, angering him in the process. And, as with the others, and the emphasis on her feet, he slowly lifts her off the ground and spends the next couple of minutes strangling her to death.

For Eve's role, if there's enough room in their bathroom, I've asked that they shoot the same type of scene with her. She'll be playing another career woman who's attacked while in the shower, after having just turned the water off. The killer attacks her as she's reaching for a towel. I've asked that her hair be styled in an updo and kept dry.

Four fatal throatlifts for $150. Un-fucking-believable.