I totally loved the gun fun scenes, but the machinegun ones took me to this thread.
Now please John dont take this personally as Im just bringin your video as an example because its the most recent one. But my "critic" (in shape of a question) is towards to the main portion of the fetish producers that for some reason (I think its customer based) deliver mostly bad acted machinegunning scenes.
I have seen videos from Bluestone, KHP, JohnM and AF.
Overall I think I only can think of 1 or 2 from AF and KHP that really made my day.
Bluestone`s Petra and Suzi scenes I`ve seen were very dissapointing and the ones I saw in gun play demo from John were way too cheese to me (I especially see as a wasted opportunity the scene where the girl is on her knees and the rest shoot at her).
Now im not saying Bluestone and JohnM suck (I love some of their products and believe they are mostly talented). Im saying that, even if those scenes were like that because they felt a bigger portion of the customers would like it, or because they were asked to do it that way; I can accept the premise but can`t like the final product.
Things that annoy me most are the very irreal shaking from girls, they seem more like dancing and albeit the machinegun fetish to me at least involves a shaking, it has to be a little more violent and brutal. And im not saying brutal in terms of blood (which I like btw), but in the way they should scream and jerk.
Now I do have the feeling that most of the machinegunning scenes come from customs since I bet they dont sell much to an open audience. I think its a small niche. So I believe most of the "multiple shooting" customers really want a long portrayed shaking scene that borders the line of cheesyness (sp?). Thats fair enough I guess.
But what if im wrong?
On another point, shootings are mostly hard to make sellable as they have a very short erotic scene involved once the gun is firing. So in order to make a video plausible for audience most producers have to come with an idea to drawn the scenes longer and still make a good product out of it. So if that is already hard with a single gun and two or three bullets, then a full chest machinegunning is a real challenge.
However, from the videos Ive seen that I really LIKED the way to deal with that was adding wall slides, or a more lenghty fall down.
Either she gets shot and jerks against a wall sliding it down, or she gets machinegunned and still keeps her balance only to then fall on her knees, and secondly on her back lying widespread.
Oh and the overkilling, oh god I hate it when she is almost lying and the guy keeps firing (nothing wrong with that) and she twitches and rolls, and makes some weird movements with her hands... it totally spoils the scene to me.
Dont get me wrong, I love overkills but not done in that way.
If you want to make scenes longer You can have her still cupping her breasts after the fusillade and moaning a little... I dont know, I can think of some ways to deal with the problem of "lenght". And at the same time make the scene believable and tasty for those of us who like machinegunnings but more brutal ones.
But from a customer point of view of course. I guess there are other techincal issues and sale-keypoints in the middle to explain why things are that way.
And again, I have to point this redundantly because im scared that it is taken as that I want a girl being butchered to pieces with a .66mm machinegun. What I mean with "brutal" is that I want the girl to really scream out loud, a two or three vowels scream, and not a drawn out multipaced moan as if she was masturbating. It should be a scream close to a one coming from a shotgun blast.
another common mistake (in my opinion as a customer of course and with no experience as a filmmaker) is to make the sound too loud. I lose her screams because the "ratata" is way to loud. I like the sound of her chest being shot, and that is good and usually muffled so it combines very well with her screaming.
Oh well, just a little ranting... to see how many other machinegunning fans are there and how different our tastes might be.
Take care,
SM
edit: ps: luckily there are still good written stories covering this niche. Just wished more girls liked it
