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Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 6:18 pm
by Nyghtfall
A posh hotel is about to become the setting for a series of murders. The Head of Security is a serial killer who preys on traveling business women. He attacks them while they're showering and strangles them to death. Because I'm on a tight budget, he's also patient, methodical, and very particular about the women he targets.

I'm commissioning the series with PKF. They provide a controlled environment with a fully equipped studio featuring a beautiful shower that's ideal for simulating an upscale hotel bathroom. I've also worked with them before, and John is a consummate professional.

I drafted a script for the first video and sent it to PKF, last night. It will cost me at least $650, and John is going to direct. I have the money, I'm just waiting for a suitable model to play the first victim. Meanwhile, I thought you all might enjoy reading the script.

http://www.cinemasphyxia.com/scripts/Sh ... angler.pdf

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 6:54 am
by GMC8121
Great Story, like the idea for the series!

Can't wait to see it played out!

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2015 12:46 pm
by Nyghtfall
The killer has found his first victim. Lily LaBeau will play an Executive who's in town for series of meetings.

I want to provide visual context for each victim's character background, so they'll be fully clothed prior to their demise. I can't afford an outfit in time for Lily's shoot, so I've given John creative control over what she'll be wearing.

I've already sent him the final draft of my script, and uploaded it for your reading pleasure. The project is fully funded with a total cost to me of $700.

I can't wait to see how it turns out. Based on past experience, I'm sure he'll knock it out of the park.

http://www.cinemasphyxia.com/scripts/Sh ... angler.pdf

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2015 9:19 pm
by GMC8121
Nyghtfall wrote:The killer has found his first victim. Lily LaBeau will play an Executive who's in town for series of meetings.

I want to provide visual context for each victim's character background, so they'll be fully clothed prior to their demise. I can't afford an outfit in time for Lily's shoot, so I've given John creative control over what she'll be wearing.

I've already sent him the final draft of my script, and uploaded it for your reading pleasure. The project is fully funded with a total cost to me of $700.

I can't wait to see how it turns out. Based on past experience, I'm sure he'll knock it out of the park.

http://www.cinemasphyxia.com/scripts/Sh ... angler.pdf
Awesome!

Can't wait to see Lily & her beautiful feet kicking & dangling! :excited:

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 8:36 pm
by Nyghtfall
EDIT: Post removed.

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2015 1:53 am
by Nyghtfall
I received my copy of the video, and it is fantastic! Lily's performance was spot-on. The elements John added to my script greatly enhanced what I envisioned. He knows exactly what I like, and it clearly shows.

The video is tentatively titled, "Night Shower", and will serve as the template for the sequels.

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2015 9:35 pm
by GMC8121
Any idea when this'll be released?

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2015 2:28 pm
by Nyghtfall
GMC8121 wrote:Any idea when this'll be released?
No idea. Sorry.

Since John owns the copyright for the video, I got his permission to grab a few screenshots. I am blown away by what he and everyone involved accomplished.

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Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2015 8:12 pm
by GMC8121
WOW!!!

Those look fantastic :clap:

Can't wait!

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:12 am
by GMC8121
It just went up on Nicheclips a little bit ago!

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 12:35 am
by Nyghtfall
PKF Studios have lost their studio. Their Landlord sold the building. They will carry on, but the sequels I had planned for my Night Shower series have been scrapped.

I've also decided not to finance anymore fetish videos, with anyone. Night Shower was the best $700 I've spent on a custom since In Thirty with the same producer, so I'm stopping on a high note. At least I can say I put my money where my mouth is, and that feels pretty fuckin' great.

Going forward, I'm focusing all of my resources on advancing my 3D art.

Re: Shower Strangler (Custom Script)

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 8:33 am
by Egeek
Nyghtfall wrote:PKF Studios have lost their studio. Their Landlord sold the building. They will carry on, but the sequels I had planned for my Night Shower series have been scrapped.

I've also decided not to finance anymore fetish videos, with anyone. Night Shower was the best $700 I've spent on a custom since In Thirty with the same producer, so I'm stopping on a high note. At least I can say I put my money where my mouth is, and that feels pretty fuckin' great.

Going forward, I'm focusing all of my resources on advancing my 3D art.
wow. hope to see them film ore stuff somehow. I love that clip night shower too. true sometimes it may be best to end on a high note. who knows. when a custom comes out great or amazing or close to it because of what ever reason it does feel pretty fuckin' great.